Wednesday, 18 April 2012

Five Worst Places To Work

    Five Worst Places To Work
Throughout the world fast food restaurants are found. They may be a convenient and cheap way to have a meal fast. At the same time fast food restraints are not the best place to work. I am going to explain the worst fast food restaurants you can work at. The order in which they appear depends on how busy and how greasy the restaurants are.
    Number five on my list would be Burger king. I would choose burger king because out of most fast food restraints is not as busy. Compared to most fast food restraints working there wouldn’t be as busy. Also with Burger king you will find if you are working there it wouldn’t be as greasy as other fast food restraints.
    Number four on my list would be A&W. I would pick this to be number four on the worst place to work because it is not as greasy as some fast food joints, but is busier then burger king with their famous A&W root beer. Working at A&W would not be a good place to work because the store is small and you would be constantly trying not to hit or hurt anyone when walking through.
    Number three on my list would be Dixie lee. I would pick this as number on the worst place to work because there are many rumors about their chicken. I would not want to be stuck plucking the feathers out of the chicken. I think it would be a hard place to work because it is constantly busy and the chicken is hard to cook just right without burning the chicken or yourself.
    Number two on my list would be KFC. I would choose KFC as a bad place to work because out of most fast food restraints there have been story told about their chicken. Apparently, their chicken have worms in them. Ick.  If I was working at KFC I would not want to see worms in a place where I have eaten before. Along with the worms KFC have some of the weirdest meals which would more than likely be hard to make perfect.
    Number one on my list would be McDonald’s. I chose McDonald’s as the worst place to work because it is constantly busy.  Being busy can cause accidents with grease that can change your life. McDonald’s also would be very greasy that at the end of the day would leave you with pimples and an ungodly Oder.
    After looking through fast food restraints McDonald’s would be the worst place to work. Due to all the negative aspects of McDonald’s on my list it would be the worst place to work. Personally, if I had to chose a place to work, I would pick Burger King, as it is the best of the worst, compared to working at McDonald’s, which in my opinion is the worst of the worst.

Tuesday, 10 April 2012

Correction

1.   So, taking a page of Jem and Scout Finches books, his friends dare him to go inside of the mystery mans house and bring something out with him to prove that he was actually in there.
Taking a page of Jem and Scout Finch’s book his friends dare him to go inside of the mysterious man's house and bring something with him to prove he was actually there.
2.   Jamal is a very talented writer and a gifted basketball player and ends up going to a private school who takes him in a basketball scholar ship and this is where people learn of his talented writing ability, but this is all after being taken in as a somewhat student of the famous writer William Forrester, after being dared to enter the apartment of William Forrester know by the boys as “The Window” because he is always standing in his window watching the birds as we find out later on.
      Jamal is a very talented writer and a gifted basketball player. He ends up going to a private school that awards him with  a basketball scholarhip and this is where people learn of his talented writing ability. This all happens after being taken in as a sort of a student of the famous writer William Forrester. He meets forester after being dared to enter his apartment. The famous writer was known as  “The Window” because he is always standing in his window watching the birds.
3.   Jamal was dared to go into the old man’s apartment; the old who is always looking out the window.
      Jamal was dared to go into the old man’s apartment; the old man who is always looking out the window.
4.   The movie finding forester was a very well done movie, the actors matched the characters in the movie really well.
The movie Finding Forrester was a very well done movie; the actors protrayed the characters very well.
5.   In my opinion the movie was complete success. The story alone was unique and intriguing enough to keep interest.
In my opinion the movie was a complete success. The story alone was unique and interesting to keep me wondering throughout the movie.
6.   The setting shows the struggle that both Jamal and William are faced respectively faced with, such as self acceptance, overcoming your fears, and doing what you love.
      The setting shows the struggle that both Jamal and William faced respectively , such as self-acceptance, overcoming your fears, and doing what you love.
7.   The quality of the film was good , i felt there could of been more colors rather then always seeming to be in the dark throughout the movie.
 The quality of the film was good. I felt there could of been more colours rather than always seeming to be in the dark throughout the movie.
8.   The protrayed their characters very well, and I believe that they did an excellent job at presenting the theme of family.
They portrayed their characters very well and I believe that they did an excellent job at presenting the theme of family.
9.   For example; William assists Jamal with his writing skills and Jamal helps William get out of his house more to live his life.
For example, William assists Jamal with his writing skills, and Jamal helps William get out of his house more to live his life.

10. This story is about a black boy who lives in the Bronx in New York this boy’s name is Jamal.
      This story is about a black boy, Jamal who lives in Bronx, New York this boy’s.
11. If I had to compare this movie with another movie I would compare it to the blind side because the both main characters have the same characteristics almost, especially the sport talents and they both get scholarships and were able to play in the big leagues as they got older.
      If I had to compare this movie with another movie, I would compare it to The Blind Side because both main characters have the same characteristics, especially there talents sports. They both get scholarships and are able to play in the big leagues as they get older.
12.Jamal Wallace is a played by Rob Brown, his character plays a 16 year old boy who plays basketball and is a fantastic writer and who just gets by in school but did exceptionally well on his state exam.
      Jamal Wallace is played by Rob Brown. The  character is a 16 year old boy who plays basketball and is a fantastic writer. Who just gets by in school but dose exceptionally well on his state exam.  
13. This is my favorite quote in the movie because it makes you laugh at the first but that the end it leaves you really thinking.
     This is my favorite quote in the movie because it makes you laugh at the first, But by the end it leaves you thinking.
14.I didn't really enjoy this movie because I'm not into movies about writing or about basketball, but if you like them types of movies then i would recommend you watch it.
I didn't really enjoy this movie because I'm not into movies about writing or about basketball. But if you like those types of movies then I would recommend you watch it.
15.The boys dare Jamal to go up to the mans appartment and bring something back, so Jamal heads up, and ends up bickering with he man.
The boys dare Jamal to go up to the old man's apartment and bring something back. Instead Jamal heads up and bickers with the old man who caught him sneeking in.
16.Both of the unsuspected family members both are lack on social skills and needed someone to help them regain them so they can get back out in the world.
Both of the unsuspected family members  lack on social skills and needed some help to regain them so they can get back out in the world.